Thursday, 27 March 2014
Thursday, 20 March 2014
Thursday, 13 March 2014
Rough Cut audience feedback
Thanks to my Audience feedback, I was able to analyse with my peers possible improvements with my film. It was suggested that a voice over was added and it was also pointed out that the rough cut was all too similar to an opening sequence with the institutional details all at the end.
Tuesday, 25 February 2014
Monday, 24 February 2014
Audience Research
To gain my audience research I constructed an online survey on SurveyMonkey. This is to interact more with the audience and make them feel more involved with my production, here is my link:
https://www.surveymonkey.com/s/JF89B88
Friday, 14 February 2014
Wednesday, 12 February 2014
Monday, 10 February 2014
Logo Development and Final product
My production logo is meant to be a physical embodiment of my production name 'Divine Entertainment' I used Adobe Photoshop CS6 to add the wings and the halo to personify my name 'Divine' which means 'Godly' so I thought it was a clever play on words. The 'E' is for 'Entertainment' so the logo is written in 'Rosewood STD Regular' which is similar to the font used on posters advertising circuses which is in fact a form of entertainment.
Tuesday, 28 January 2014
Monday, 20 January 2014
Tuesday, 14 January 2014
Photo Storyboard
Here is my photo storyboard, I have left out the texts screens I created using After Effects because I couldn't take a picture of it.
Shooting Script
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Shot
Type
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Script
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Establishing
Shot of House
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No dialogue
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Long
Shot of sisters walking to school
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No dialogue
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Black
Screen
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Text: Two sisters
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Long
shot of sisters walking to school
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No dialogue
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Black
Screen
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Text: Inseparable
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Shot –
reverse – shot of sisters talking about the secret
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Lily: “I can’t believe we just did that, we could get in trouble with
the police!”
Zoe: “which is why we can’t tell anyone “
Lily: “But-”
Zoe: “NO! you have to promise me you won’t tell anyone”
Lily: “But-“
Zoe: “No! pinkie promise me”
*pinkie promises*
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Black
Screen
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Text: Torn
apart by a secret
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Long
shot of empty swings in the park
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No dialogue
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High
angle shot of empty roundabout
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No dialogue
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High
angle shot of Lily sitting alone on the roundabout
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No dialogue
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Low
angle long shot of Lily cowering in a corner
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*Crying*
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Mid-shot
of Lily looking out the window holding her teddy bear
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No dialogue
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Close
up of Lily’s face
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“I’ve got to tell someone.”
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Close
up of Zoe
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“You’ll do no such thing.”
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Mid
shot of Lily jumping back in fear
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*Gasping*
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Close up of Zoe
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“You promised, remember?”
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Slow motion extreme close up of teddy bear
falling to the floor.
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No dialogue
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Fade
to black
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No dialogue
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High
angle shot of Lily waking up tied up
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No dialogue
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Low
angle close up shot of Zoe
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“This is for your own good, I can’t risk it.”
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High
angle shot of Lily looking terrified, door shutting on her
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*Muffled scream*
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Fade
to black
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“I’m sorry. I really am.”
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Tracking
shot of Lily running
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No dialogue
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Cut to
black
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No dialogue
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Tracking
shot of Lily running
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No dialogue
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Slow
motion close up of Lily stopping looking terrified
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*Gasping*
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Cut to
black
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Echo “Promise me.”
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Institutional
Details
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Shot List
Shot List
1. Establishing shot: House
2. Production Company Name (presents)
3. Long shot: Lily and Zoe walking to school together holding hands (Black and White)
4. Black Screen: Text – Two sisters
5. Shot reverse shot: sisters talking, saying they can’t reveal their secret (Black and White) (Fade to black)
6. Long shot: Sisters pinkie promising (Black and white) ( Fade to black )
7. Black screen: Text – Inseperable
8. Long shot: Empty swings.
9. High angle shot: Empty roundabout
10. High angle shot: Lily sitting on the roundabout
11. Low angle long shot: Lily crying in a corner
12. Mid - shot: Lily looking out the window holding her teddy bear
13. Extreme close – up: Looking down saying she needs to tells someone
14. Close – up shot: saying you’ll do no such thing
15. Mid shot: jumping back in fear
16. Close up: Zoe intimidating Lily
17. Slow – motion extreme close up: Teddy dropping on the floor
18. Fade to black
19. High angle shot: Lily tied up looking terrified
20. Low angle close up: “This is for your own good, I can’t risk it”
21. High angle shot: Door shutting on Lily (muffled scream)
22. Fade to black: (voiceover) “I’m sorry. I really am.”
23. Long tracking shot: Lily running
24. Cut to Black
25. Long tracking shot: Lily running
26. Cut to black
27. Slow motion close up: Lily stopping looking at straight at the camera
28. Fade to black: (Voiceover) “Promise me.”
29. Institutional details
Pitch
An 11 - year old Zoe and a 10 – year old sisters Zoe and Lily are walking to school together holding hands, on the way home. Zoe and Lily have done something terrible, and swear each other to secrecy. Months pass the secret is really eating Lily. Lily is struggling to cope without her sister help, who seems to be living fine, but Lily wants to come clean about what really happened that day. Zoe realises how fragile and weak Lily is. She cannot risk being found out by anyone so she kidnaps her sister and takes her to a secluded place and tries to talk her round into justifying what they did all those months ago. While all these goes on Zoe is stone faced at home while everyone at her house is frantically looking for Lily. Back in the secret hiding place, Lily attempts to run away. Zoe catches up with her unknowingly being followed by her mother who when she finds them forces them to tell the whole truth of what has happened and what’s been going on with them the whole time. They finally confess and their mother has no choice but to call the police for what Zoe did and she is taken away.
Chirel Bikuma as Zoe Royce
Doriane Bikuma as Lily Royce
Introduction
I'm Divine Mckengo. I'm working alone, even though I enjoyed working in a group last year I felt that I had to compromise a lot of my ideas and didn't have enough creative freedom, so I'm working alone to get the creative control. I decided to create a film trailer of an Action - Thriller genre for my promotional package. Candidate number - 7644.
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